Mae Lewitt

[midnightchaos]

Stats

Name: Mae Katharine Lewitt
Age: 17
Birthday: 1st May
Gender: female
Height: 5 ft 6"
Weight: 7 stone
Sexual Orientation: bi
Ethnicity: white
Race: witch
Time Era (Modern or Victorian): victorian

Appearance

Build: hourglass
Hair: black waist length ragged
Eyes: black/ violet
Clothing: black lace corset, ragged skirt short, black and purple striped stockings and armwarmers

Personality

Likes: Cats, solitude, magic
Dislikes: idiots and danger
Fears: death and emotional hurt
Goals: to find love
Self Esteem Level: low but hides it
Skills/Strengths: Magic, wit
Weaknesses: emotions
Overall Personality: cold and introverted

Background

Parents/Guardians: Katherine Lewitt, Eric Lewitt
Siblings: Emily Lewitt
History: Mae lived with her parents and Emily In a big manor. Her mother was a witch which was a tradition through her mothers ancestors. Her father was deeply in love with her mother and as she only used magic for good, never questioned her choice of being a witch.
Her mother was discovered as a witch when her father accidently let it slip out when he was Tipsy in a bar one night. The locals mobbed her house and Killed her mother. Her Father tried to look after the children for a few months but was driven to depression and shortly took his own life.
As they cleared out the house Mae's witch possessions and tome was discovered. Not wanting another Mob, She told the Locals it was Her's and Emily had not yet learned the way of the witch and so Emily was taken away to an orphanage. Mae ran away before anyone could take action on her for being a witch and disappeared in to the countryside. She quickly became overcome with grief for all her loss, was hallucinating and had acquired 3 imaginary Cats.
A local Farm boy found her as she tried to take her own life, The farm boy's father rang for the Asylum who took her away.

Diseast &Treatments:

Diagnosed Condition: Suicide and manic depression (hallucinations)
Treatment 1: Medicine for Hallucinations 7 am
Treatment 2: Leech 10 am
Treatment 3: Shock Therapy 1 pm
Treatment 4: Medicine for Hallucinations 6 pm

Cell Number: A-002-02
Cell Mates: Faye Matthews, Mercy Meave

Random Info: Her magic skills include: shield, heal, magic bolt, potions (poisons) and premonitions

Her three Imaginary Cats follow her everywhere and can sometimes be not so imaginary. They are called Lynxy, Lolita and Cheshire.

[Calw Walker]

Ok. you have alot you need to add.
First, you need to redo your treatments. have Leeching as the only treatment 4 times per day can potentially kill you, and second is more or less lazy. Also, you never filled in the "Diagnosed Condition" feild.

I need to ask you to go into a lot more depth with the history. Please edit it so that it answers the following questions.

How was her mother discovered to be a witch?
Why was her mother a witch?
Where is/has her father this whole time?
Did her father just never care that his wife was a witch?
Why didn't he take his children with him?
Why was Mae sent to the Asylum?
Why wasn't her sister sent with her?

Lastly, you might want to go back and reread the characte rules. It says that the admins will assign cell numbers and cell mates.

[midnightchaos]

right yeah sorry, i was in a SUPER rush and hadn't actually finished or anything.... I will just go deal with all that!

What other treatments could i have?

[Calw Walker]

It's alright Midnight! Don't worry about it! ^_^

[Calw Walker]

Alright, got the basics so your profile is as far as the history is concerned. Now there is actually a lot for the treatment you can do.
Aroma Therapy: re-install the 'fact' that herbs and flowers are for cooking and decoration. not witchcraft
Religious Therapy: re-install the idea that Christianity is the only real religion.
Shock Therapy: for manic depression
Medicine: for hallucinations.

[Calw Walker]

alright. this is good enough to pass. approved and moved.

[D-chan]

Do you still need a cell mate?

[midnightchaos]

yeah, if your victorian era (i can't recall if you are sorry) and it's accpeted then we could go together. That ok calw?

[Calw Walker]

Well this all slipped past me. XD
just looked through the characters and yes you may.
Mae can room with Faye in the Victorian Cell A-002.
I'll go ahead and modify and move both profiles.